Posts Tagged ‘Editorial Judgment’

The News (Jamiat Group?)

Monday, October 17th, 2011

The News (Jang Group)Islami Jamiat Talaba (IJT), the allegedly independent student political group widely considered student wing of Jamaat-i-Islami, is holding a three-day convention in Lahore presently. While such a conference can be a legitimate news story, we were surprised by the way that it was reported by The News (Jang Group).

An article in yesterday’s The News reported on the start of IJT’s convention. This was basically a standard news report that a convention is taking place at Punjab University, and reporting what the attendants were saying.

What appeared on page 25, though, were neither standard nor factual news reports. Rather, The News published not one but two ‘National News’ articles proclaiming IJT as the saviours of the nation. Again, please note that these were not published as ‘Opinion’ pieces, but as ‘National News’, suggesting the articles were based on objective facts.

The News (Jang Group) Islami Jamiat Talaba

One article, Long Live Jamiat!, claims that “Jamiat is a ray of hope for the nation as well as the whole Muslim Ummah”. We’re not sure the whole Muslim Ummah agrees. The author even praises students role in “the bloodshed of 1971″ – bloodshed for which members of Jamaat-i-Islami are currently charged with war crimes “for allegedly leading groups that took part in killing, looting, arson and rape of Bangladeshis”. The piece ends with a prayer that, “Allah (S.W.T) give strength to Jamiat to assist the contemporary Islamic Movements of the world and provide them a young, energetic, trained, active, learned and full of abilities leadership”. We are puzzled to think what professional editor could think this is appropriate to publish as ‘National News’.

Another headline on the same page proclaims, ‘The new era for Jamiat’. And what exactly is this ‘new era’? It is an era of ‘ideological confrontation’ against the ‘Western civilization [that] has its roots in our lives’. According to the author Shahnawaz Farooqi, this will be an ideological battle similar to the one in which IJT defeated Communism. Yes, the author actually claims that IJT defeated communism.

Actually, this ‘new era’ must not be very new as the author Shahnawaz Farooqi wrote an almost identical article, even bearing the same headline, for The News two years ago.

If you don’t recognize the author, since he was published without a by line, Shahnawaz Farooqi is a ‘journalist’ with the Urdu daily Jasarat, widely considered a mouthpiece of Jamaat-i-Islami. This raises the question why The News is publishing pro-Jamaati propaganda by Jasarat and IJT writers?

IJT’s convention is a legitimate story to cover, but it is not an excuse to publish political propaganda supporting a particular political party or ideology. The pieces ‘Long Live Jamiat!’ and ‘The New Era for Jamiat’ did not appear as opinion pieces, but were rather published as ‘National News’, suggesting that they contained facts and not merely the author’s opinions. That the pro-Jamiat stories published on Sunday were not even written by usual Jang Group writers also raises the question how they came to be published at all.

Media Adds Bodies, Confusion To Drone Death Count

Tuesday, May 17th, 2011

Since Geo took a report from AFP and added two bodies to the death count from a pair of drone strikes in North Waziristan on Monday, news agencies have been in a race to the top of the pile of bodies.

The News and Jang added an extra body, making the total 10 deaths.

Express Tribune added another two bodies, bringing the total death count to 12.

Daily Express and Nawa-i-Waqt each raised the body count to 15.

Each article appears to have the death count confirmed by ‘security officials’, but contains different numbers – even news outlets that are part of the same media group. Geo has different numbers than Jang and Express Tribune has different numbers than Daily Express. Which report is correct? We do not know. What we do know is that this is another example of poor reporting and editing which serves only to confuse the public on grave issues facing the nation.

The Power of Words

Thursday, April 14th, 2011

Very interesting comment on the power of words and the importance in choosing our words carefully as journalists. The author reminds us that we have through our words the ability to shape public opinion and heavily influence the path of the nation. This is a great power but also a great responsibility and we should take this responsibility seriously. The following article is by American Lieutenant Commander Tammy Swofford and was published in Daily Times.

Tammy SwoffordThe Ameri-Pak situation appears at an all-time low. Headlines across the globe trumpet the same news, whether the Daily Times of Pakistan or The New York Times of April 12, which sported the headline, ‘Pakistan tells US it must sharply cut CIA activities.’

The lead sentence for the article also bears mention: “The demand that the US scale back its presence is a sign of the near collapse of cooperation between the two testy allies after the arrest of a CIA security officer in Pakistan.”

All acknowledge the existence of a complex problem. All involved understand that blame, while never being coequal in status, must still be shouldered with equal responsibility if solutions are to be negotiated. But what complicates things immensely are the journalism drones. We are a pompous lot, those of us who serve up opinions from our desks, whilst sipping our tea and gazing out the window. Our thoughts take quick flight with the least whiff of a stink. Journalists love a ready-made story and this current drama presents multiple angles of presentation. Because this current stench betwixt and between our nations is likely to continue in unabated manner for months to come, it is good to remember a few basic rules of professional journalism.

Words have power. Each word is like a bullet with velocity and impact. The word ‘murder’ takes on a different meaning when presented as a ‘heinous murder’. The same is true for the word ‘rape’ if presented as ‘brutal rape’. But we cannot forget that words also have the power to heal, mend, lift and restore. This is also the task of a journalist, one that requires greater writing skill.

Articles written for news organisations must be read by the author twice, and in view of two different audiences: the reasonable man and the unreasonable man. It is after reading the piece for the latter audience that necessary corrections and adjustments to text are made. This is the careful copy-edit that looks into the soul of the writer to assure that integrity prevails and human bias and sentimentality do not overshadow otherwise excellent thoughts. The writer who consistently invalidates their craft by seeking to chamber a bullet with excessive passion must be held accountable. They must not easily escape the impact of their words.

Truth should never be obscured from the reader. The truth currently lies bare between our nations, and it is the function of a free press. But there is a greater truth, which must be understood when writing on a level that addresses difficulties between sovereign powers. What cannot be immediately changed must be walked through with endurance and resolve. Nations are bound by treaties and policy and complexities that the average citizen can scarcely grasp. Nations can find themselves within a foreign policy wasteland, which necessitates sustaining a status quo to avoid a greater political instability. So words must be chosen with special care when tackling policy issues in the print media.

The best of journalists are able to speak the truth in a manner that strengthens the weak, anchors the thought and brings comfort and hope to the reader. It is the art of gracious words, a somewhat lost art in the world of print journalism. I am always optimistic. The best writers are out there. They will rise to the top of their game — with the right choice of words.

A Tale of Two Courts

Friday, April 8th, 2011

A visitor from another country who learned about the judiciary from Pakistani media might be forgiven for believing that there are two high courts in the land.

One court is made up of innocent angels who are incessantly bullied by a power-obsessed strong man in the presidency. This court is described by Taj M Khattak in a column for The News. In case you are wondering what are Taj M Khattak’s qualifications for commenting on judiciary and government relations, he is a retired military officer. Here is how Vice Admiral (retd) Khattak describes things.

Back on Nov 28, 1997, during Nawaz Sharif’s second term as prime minister, charged political workers of his PML-N stormed the Supreme Court on Constitution Avenue in Islamabad. The judges inside had to scramble for safety to their chambers.

The PPP continues this undesirable practice of intimidation of the higher judiciary. It began with the appearance of Law Minister Babar Awan in the Supreme Court in July 2010, accompanied by a large posse of cabinet ministers and party politicians. One of the judges on the occasion remarked that the law minister had not been summoned but invited.

According to Vice Adm. (retd) Khattak, political workers storming the court in 1997 is the same as the government ministers appearing at the court per an invitation by the justices – a threat to order.

But there is a competing view of the courts which is less popular among media talking heads. This view, expressed by President Supreme Court Bar Association Asma Jahangir in Dawn earlier this week, describes a Supreme Court that, driven by a desire to demonstrate its independence, has been acting outside the boundaries of its legal mandate.

Simply grabbing more and more authority does not enhance independence. It only makes the judiciary controversial and partisan. Two recent judgments of the SC, ousting the constitutional powers of the Parliamentary Committee (PC) from decision-making while appointing judges to the superior courts and suggesting that the chief justice of Pakistan be consulted while appointing a chairman of the National Accountability Bureau (NAB) indicates that the SC wishes to assume the role of legislating and in running the affairs of the state.

Which is the more accurate representation? That is a complex question that requires more space than is available here. But it should still be asked why the opinions promoted by some media groups so closely follows the opinions of retired military officers while the opinion of the President Supreme Court Bar Association is resigned to reports on her own remarks.

When editors request columns for the opinion pages, they have the power to shape public opinion by molding people’s perceptions of reality. When people read several individuals taking the same view on an issue, they are inclined to agree with the popular viewpoint. Therefore, the question should be asked why the opinions of retired military officers are more popular in the media than the opinions of legal experts?

Don’t Mention Balochistan

Thursday, April 7th, 2011

We have written before about cases of media silence and self-censorship, and two recent pieces again raised this question in our minds, so we present it to you today for your consideration. Recent media hot topics include Raymond Davis, ZAB reference, and HEC. But the media has also been strangely silent on other issues. One of these issues is the state of human rights in Balochistan.

And editorial in The Baloch Hal, the first online Baloch newspaper, presents an excellent case for the possibility that national media is ignoring serious human rights violations in Balochistan.

Balochistan militantsThe Pakistan media has adopted double standards while covering Balochistan. This attitude has not only left the people’s problems under-reported but it has also incensed the foreign journalists and investors who wanted to learn more about the ground situation in Balochistan.

One such article that highlighted the blackout of more important issues in the Pakistani media appeared in the US journal Foreign Policy on March 31st in which the author Ahmed Rafay Alam pointed out that the death of at least 43 miners in the outskirts of Quetta was not covered by the Pakistani media. Instead, the national media was engaged in covering relatively unimportant issues only to keep the whole country ignorant about the explosive situation in the country.

The author of the Foreign Policy article wrote: “The role of the media in bringing this incident  [of miners' death in Quetta]to public attention also deserves a look.  The near-total media blackout of this most recent incident has less to do with censorship of any form than with viewing dynamics.  Milk, soaps and mobile phones (rather than coal) are sold in Pakistani cities, and urbanites don’t care what going on in the districts. The media contents itself to whip up public emotion over issues related to “national honor” as in the cases of Raymond Davis and Dr. Aafia Siddiqui, ignoring serious but less sexy issues like mine safety. Yet working conditions in Baluchistan are unlikely to improve without the media reporting on them.”

This argument was further expressed by Pakistan representative Human Rights Watch Ali Dayan Hasan in an interview with Raza Rumi for The News on Sunday.

TNS: Is there sufficient international and domestic focus on human rights situation in Balochistan?

Aftermath of attack by militants in BalochistanADH: Unfortunately there is not. The Pakistani media does not report on the brutal realities of Balochistan in any meaningful manner. Despite the fact that the province is of great strategic interest to the world, its people suffer from persistent, systemic and widespread human rights abuse both by state authorities and at the hands of non-state actors. It is time Pakistanis and the world paid attention.

Media watchers and all Pakistanis should ask if media is performing its proper role to society by focusing incessantly on allegations of ‘Sindh Card’ and conspiracy theories while the citizens are abused by militants and suffering real problems.

Media's Moment of Shame – Farrukh Khan Pitafi

Thursday, October 21st, 2010

Farrukh Khan PitafiFarrukh Khan Pitafi takes the media to task in his column for Daily Times today over the recent rumour mongering by certain newspapers and TV stations which fueled an unnecessary tension between the executive and judiciary. He also makes the point that has been noted here previously that there is a severe crisis in the media due to a lack of professionalism among editors who should be held responsible for ensuring that articles are reliably sourced and factually accurate before allowing them to be published.

Never throughout my career have I felt as ashamed as I feel now about the media’s misconduct. Last week a few news channels flashed an item that was later proved to be nothing more than a rumour. The item claimed that the government was about to withdraw the notification that had reinstated the judges sacked by Musharraf. The apex court’s judges met in emergency and issued a press release. I am not to discuss the court’s reaction or the government’s attitude when it was asked to clarify. However, I feel heartbroken by the callous attitude of our mainstream media, which brought the country to a standstill with reports that it has failed to substantiate. Could it be an elaborate deception by a section of the press or a government ploy to expose the media’s lack of responsibility? We may never know. However, there is no doubt that the reports were aired without regard to the best practices known to journalists. And had there been any evidence present to back the claims up, it would have already surfaced by now.

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Dear Editors, Please Wake Up!

Wednesday, June 23rd, 2010

Sleeping on the jobI remember the first time I got a small job at a newspaper and wrote my first article. I was proud of it and certain that it would shake things up. One of my heroes was Bob Woodward, the American journalist who broke the ‘Watergate’  story about corruption in the White House. I imagined myself being loved by the people and feared by corrupt politicians and businessmen. The Bob Woodward of Pakistan! When my editor summoned me to his office I was certain he would praise my good work. Instead, I found the opposite.

“What is your source for this information?” he asked. I was stunned. Everybody knew the rumours. It was common knowledge. “You can’t just go around making such claims about people without some very solid evidence! If you are wrong, you will look like a fool and I will look like a fool also!” He was irate. My piece never ran. And a good thing it was, too – I had accused the wrong man.

This taught me a very important lesson about reporting. Sometimes reporters get a little bit caught up in a story. It becomes hard to separate yourself and see the facts objectively once you are sure that you have your man. You actually become part of the story yourself – the hero reporter who exposes corruption.

This is where the editor has a vital job. It is his responsibility to look at the story, judge it based on the sources and the evidence, and decide if it is fit to print. At least, he should. It seems that too often our editors today are falling asleep on the job and letting any Tom, Dick or Harry run whatever wild story they want. We need our editors to please do their job.

Babar Ayaz understands what I am saying. His column for Daily Times yesterday perfectly describes the problem of editors asleep on the job.

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